Better flow, eliminate vague words.
Their Eyes Were Watching God essay: more insight throughout the whole essay; didn't have as much in the first two body paragraph and had more in the third. Also, make the intro a little more specific (thesis too.)
Pride and prejudice essay:
Vague words-sometimes in thesis/topic sentences I am a little too vague
Hamlet essay:
Apostrophes- making sure of correct use and agreement
Vagueness- sometimes, especially in thesis, I get a little vague and need to make sure I am focusing on the specific key ideas and eliminate general words
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